PsionicGenome's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Down At Juice Bar]

It wasn't bad.

But, then again, it wasn't as good as the earlier ones. I like the fact that you are able to crank these out so quickly, but I'd rather see you doing some well-thought out movies rather than rambled ones. I'm not sure if you meant it to be like that, but it sounded to me like it was all just spur-of-the-moment, random dialogue. I do hope you keep making these, and I hope you can figure out how to make them live up to their potential. Good luck, man.
-Joe-

ChrisNosal responds:

I don't know. The first episode was exactly that; spur-of-the-moment random dialogue that I cranked out really fast. And I'm actually spending more time on these. But I'll try to make them a lot better too.

[Guess What? Teapot]

An amazing failure...

But, of course, I say this with love. You see, as most animators and writers know that randomness is a hit at Newgrounds. This fact has been played out many a time, and has many times worked out. This, unfortunately, was not one of those times. Now don't get mad and write my name on that 'list' just yet, 'cause I'm not trying to be mean. Sure, I could come on here and say, "Yeah, this was teh crapiets muvie eva!!!@14@#!31! Die!" What does that do for you? Nothing. So, instead, I just wanna tell you what I think you should work on:
Randomness is good, but too much of a good thing is bad. In the case of Guess "What? Teapot" you overdid it. If you were to just cut back a bit and give a little more thought to your jokes, then I'm sure you'd do a lot better. I did have a bit of a laugh at the "Captain Crunch!" bit, but most of it just confused me to no end.
Also, work on the voice acting. The voice actors should give all they have to make it sound right, even if it is comedy. And the graphics weren't too terribly bad, but they could have been better. You may want to do a bit more in terms of backgrounds and avoid random squiggly lines. Better luck on your next project. ^_^

5SS-PsychoWiLL responds:

This is, if you can believe it - an actual story crossed with a music video.
Those 'random squiggly lines' are actually drawings, in most cases. Or a waterfall.
(During the music)
The sequel will be much better, depending how this does. Good, it means it'll never be released. Bad, means it will.